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Loving the game's designs and aesthetic theme setting! Looking forward to the potentials this project will bring, meanwhile I wanna share some of my thoughts ^^

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What I like: The story was quite easy to understand, there are some interesting mysteries here and there, like woah Jai I'm keeping my eyes on you... Overall my favorite part was the minigame, it was a nice experience and it would be fun seeing more unique interractions for players, after them reading through long dialogs.

Characters have quite personalities, I hope all of them get their time to shine! Blaire made me chuckled a few times.

And also Kouji have my heart haha

What I dislike: Even if I enjoy it, the sudden minigame really caught me off guard and I was confuse on what to do with the lack of tutorial... Don't expect players to catch up so quick! 

And what suppose to be the most thrilling part, the grand reveal that this is a killing game... I feel very little emotions it... The character's reactions feel unatural. Like the fact that they might be stuck in here forever and will be obliterated from miniguns if they fight back, didn't make much impacts at all...? The protagonist never cast any of his thoughts about it... Even Eira, the one who appeared to be very concern on people's opinions on her, didn't say anything about this event at all! Like I'm seriously hooked, but there are so little to see!

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Aside from the few fonts errors and audio glitches, I do think this series have grasped my interest. Best of luck on the kickstarter and all the one who is working on this project!

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I like the concept of the game, detective novels are always my cup of tea :) . Love the art, especially the cover art, the character designs and the music are nice too! It's a calm and simple game.

The story is ok, we didn't get to have much choices but that's fine for short visual novel like these. I noticed many spelling mistakes that can create a quite bit of confusion (For example "Get alone" instead of "Get along") but a small detail that is my personal favorite that, I get to learn more about some interesting facts between chemicals haha.

Is the case predictable? Kind of. My first suspicion toward a suspect is turn out to be correct. But I think that's for the better, if the case is longer and more complicated the game would have taken much more times and efforts. Although I can assure that it's still going to turn out amazing either way!

From what I'm seeing there isn't anything too special or that stand out, but if you up for a quick short nice story then you could spend a few min trying out this game :D 

I never left a comment in this website but after playing this game I feel like I just have to do it, to share my thoughts. So yeah first ever comment

First things, the gameplay is very unique, the themes despite being simple but still very fitting. But what've truly fascinated me and may I say the most beautiful thing about this game [Spoiler] are how you are able to create the situation so masterfully. Like you can clearly see his struggles NOT only though texts, but through his small actions constantly delete his message, though his shakings and have to take a moment to calm down. The tensions omg, I'm on the edge typing nonsense on my keyboard just to see how the story unfold.

The game make me realize how tough this situation must be, make me understand how much this character gone through, how struggle he is getting his feelings out of his chest. Thank you for creating this game, I hope many people would came to this and get the same message as I do, maybe even more :) 

P.S: The fact that you are able to type in the end just really blow my mind, I've spend a good ol few second trying to figure it out. I've tried "I love you", "I am into you", "Im gay" "Joe mama" but the correct answer is really much simple than I expected XD